Audience feedback Mrs Davies was impressed with my explorers photograph as they really represented the genre of camping and outdoor life. She liked the mood that was created by the storm cloud formation overhead and how the subjects were placed in the photograph. To improve this photograph Mrs Davies suggested that i could of focused on the three girls faces and created a close shot instead of a medium shot. Katherine admired my photographs in the spring lamb collection as they showed the genre, mood and feeling of Spring. She liked the freshness of the green grass and the blue sky and the fact that the photograph showed the mother and baby (Ewe and Lamb) just after feeding. To improve this photograph she felt that i could of focused on the one set of sheep and did not need to include the others, she suggested that i could of used a zoomed focus on the camera.